4.10 Paragraph Analysis

I have added a photo and here is a copy for my paragraph analysis. https://docs.google.com/document/d/19OasMinQE5HOO2F12aZzImMWqZUBSOr57J9j6bWysAA/edit I have found that looking on other drafts has extremely helped me get a better idea of what I am suppose to do and how I am suppose to do it. I feel a lot more comfortable and confident to fix my project into something even better.